tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post4991377397007974325..comments2023-10-08T03:52:34.480-04:00Comments on In Pursuit Of Writing: Baking For Love - Chapter One, Act OneCarmen Espositohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-8111629906315185582012-07-12T23:10:51.897-04:002012-07-12T23:10:51.897-04:00I was toying with the idea of showing the ups and ...I was toying with the idea of showing the ups and downs of Interspecies relationships. Most novels end with the happily ever after but don't show the difficulties of living together. However, romance isn't my strongest area so I panicked and haven't thought of this storyline since.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-77808010040068146492012-07-11T17:37:00.889-04:002012-07-11T17:37:00.889-04:00Excellent! Interspecie relationship! Very interest...Excellent! Interspecie relationship! Very interesting! And a vampire??? Cool!Magic Love Crowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14133368208464734546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-27219880004423603302012-05-09T21:43:15.851-04:002012-05-09T21:43:15.851-04:00I feel the same way when it comes to romance. I&#...I feel the same way when it comes to romance. I'm not entirely sure yet if there will be more snippets of this story, but I'm going to remain open minded about it.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-62435743829244946402012-05-08T23:47:09.992-04:002012-05-08T23:47:09.992-04:00Grabbed my attention right from the start, and I a...Grabbed my attention right from the start, and I agree with Magaly - it left me wanting to learn a bit more before the scenes changed. I have to agree with you also when you mentioned romance not being your "thing". It isn't mine either, although if I accidentally read it (I never seek it out nor watch it in movies) and it's brief (rather than all-consuming throughout the chapters), then it tends to spice up the story a bit. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07723368404911817023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-25216735771111340752012-05-05T23:24:44.761-04:002012-05-05T23:24:44.761-04:00Love can be painful, and life is about relationshi...Love can be painful, and life is about relationships, you know? Let her have some, and she can move on after that *hehehehe*Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-34106923325198874822012-05-05T00:28:40.777-04:002012-05-05T00:28:40.777-04:00I agree about showing the different POVs – must kn...I agree about showing the different POVs – must know what Sean is really thinking and feeling. And how about Carl? I love a man who cooks - make him a vamp and it gets…hot? Well, in Carl’s case it gets sweet, tasty and lickable.<br /><br />Perhaps there’ll be another installment of this story. These two small scenes came to me and I had to write them down but it’s heading in the direction of a love triangle. That means romance, which is Not my thing, so I’m panicking a little bit. I feel so much more<br />comfortable if they eat her in a torturous, gory way, but if they both love her then now it’s gotten mushy.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-73027925237863782112012-05-04T15:41:32.992-04:002012-05-04T15:41:32.992-04:00Wow, that's tough. To live with someone you lo...Wow, that's tough. To live with someone you love without knowing how he really feels about your flesh.<br /><br />I like the point of view jumps of our omniscient narrator. I hope this will get longer, and if it does, maybe to pick one perspective per chapter. I felt like I wanted to stay in the head of a character for a longer time.<br /><br />I really like the conflict, the living arrangements and the food ;-)Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.com