tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post5610882105803006914..comments2023-10-08T03:52:34.480-04:00Comments on In Pursuit Of Writing: Amanda GraysonCarmen Espositohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-81836888872320953192011-11-18T01:15:38.721-05:002011-11-18T01:15:38.721-05:00I really enjoyed this one. I never saw the twist ...I really enjoyed this one. I never saw the twist coming, which I really loved. I also like that, while it's clear what happens in the end, it's also left sort of unclear, for the reader to wonder about.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-20089482213965918232011-11-12T21:07:56.495-05:002011-11-12T21:07:56.495-05:00Thanks RatedManny714!
I'm glad you enjoyed th...Thanks RatedManny714!<br /><br />I'm glad you enjoyed this story. By all means do pick up the pen and write again. Creativity is a wonderful thing! :)Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-74184115787243777572011-11-12T21:00:27.665-05:002011-11-12T21:00:27.665-05:00the ending gave me the chills I was hooked on this...the ending gave me the chills I was hooked on this one through and through <br />it makes me want to pick up the pen and write again<br /><br />I am for sure a fan of your worksRatedManny714https://www.blogger.com/profile/05931911877647998438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-63143840498736680232011-11-01T21:03:28.094-04:002011-11-01T21:03:28.094-04:00Thank you so much Every Magical Day for visiting m...Thank you so much Every Magical Day for visiting my blog and leaving a lovely comment.<br /><br />Thanks Lisa, I’m glad you were able to “feel” the emotions that Amanda was experiencing.<br /><br />Thanks Autumn Wind. Stop again for a read soon.<br /><br />Thank you, Celia, for visiting my blog. And of course, I will visit you again.<br /><br />Thank you Mrs. W. I’m glad you captured the visual of her vanishing. I love it when readers immerse themselves in my stories.<br /><br />Thank you so much Mina. When I was writing it, I was concerned with ending it too abruptly. I’m glad the pace of the story flowed well.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-28188568513865311872011-10-31T20:54:55.161-04:002011-10-31T20:54:55.161-04:00What a fabulous story! I loved the details, the pa...What a fabulous story! I loved the details, the pacing, the flow. The ending was perfect.<br /><br />Thank you for stopping by for my party. Your name is in the drawing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-20912305331001939642011-10-31T00:48:57.445-04:002011-10-31T00:48:57.445-04:00Wow, this was beautiful! Thank you so much for the...Wow, this was beautiful! Thank you so much for the invite to come read it :) So happy you came by for tea! I can see her slowly disappearing as the wind picks back up again....Mrs.Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01137796388453857664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-40684883993929484662011-10-30T20:02:31.808-04:002011-10-30T20:02:31.808-04:00What a wonderful story....thank you for inviting m...What a wonderful story....thank you for inviting me over....I'm glad you stopped over at my tea party...please come back soon.Celiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07574391199840977118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-88585996584015229142011-10-30T19:47:51.654-04:002011-10-30T19:47:51.654-04:00Fabulous! I loved it. I am so glad you stopped by ...Fabulous! I loved it. I am so glad you stopped by for tea!AutumnWindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00732671501458431094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-50470547498837440752011-10-30T17:54:49.028-04:002011-10-30T17:54:49.028-04:00I love it! You descriptive detail really pulled m...I love it! You descriptive detail really pulled me into the story. You captured the confusion and fear and panic to a T. Thank you for the invite because I really enjoyed reading your story. <br />Hugs,<br />LisaLisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09088398429230683745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-72149339144966119652011-10-30T17:50:01.774-04:002011-10-30T17:50:01.774-04:00Oh that was a lovely trip. I didn't see the t...Oh that was a lovely trip. I didn't see the twist and was hit full in the face by your surprise ending. Clever girl! Very nice! I will bookmark you and read more. Thanks for stopping by my blog (http://everymagicalday.wordpress.com) <br />and sending an invite. Many Blessings!~EMDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-14987218574281103542011-10-29T13:11:00.599-04:002011-10-29T13:11:00.599-04:00Thanks!
This story came to me on Thursday and it ...Thanks!<br /><br />This story came to me on Thursday and it was so different from the usual vampire, ghouls and witches stories that I enjoy to write. I just let it flow and it was a lot of fun.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-9923142379495141582011-10-29T09:47:17.818-04:002011-10-29T09:47:17.818-04:00Eerie... I love the details. I saw her desperation...Eerie... I love the details. I saw her desperation, the missing earrings, the torn jeans... and oh my, the wonder of what happens after death was just capture so well. It is as if with this short words Amanda shows us what might happen, and at the same time she doesn't. Eerie indeed.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.com