tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post617501608737093786..comments2023-10-08T03:52:34.480-04:00Comments on In Pursuit Of Writing: The DreamCarmen Espositohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11607902019308543672noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-31567554474898826912011-05-10T16:14:18.662-04:002011-05-10T16:14:18.662-04:00I love it, and I love the line 'her emotions w...I love it, and I love the line 'her emotions were raw and heavy' ... I could really feel that.<br />Nice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02595848781243129508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-69384478733915877702011-05-03T16:37:41.886-04:002011-05-03T16:37:41.886-04:00Thanks Sam,
This story came suddenly to me and I ...Thanks Sam,<br /><br />This story came suddenly to me and I wanted to convey the intensity of the situation. Positive life altering changes would occur if she arrived on time. Failing to do so would adversely affect her. The fear of failure caused her subconscious to play the worst case scenario.Carmen Espositohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16998656137742478290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4990278961147947328.post-46311086701932226102011-04-30T01:05:56.167-04:002011-04-30T01:05:56.167-04:00You captured the stress and urgency of the moment ...You captured the stress and urgency of the moment REALLY well :)Samantha Sottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14116257082088369600noreply@blogger.com